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    Kara May1809
    Nov 02, 2020

    Lost alternate Benjamin ending (spoilers)

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    Takes place after Christmas; they go to the carnival, a man tries to buy the gas station, Jack shoots Jerry's maybe girlfriend, Jerry's head is in a box and Jack kills a lot of Benjamins. Something similar happened in the novels with the FFI reveal but I'm almost certain it happened in the blogs first. Does anyone else remember this? Where can I find it? It was an incredibly enjoyable ending where Jack really is just crazy. Any responses are appreciated, sorry if I'm being stupid lol.

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    Zach Finch
    Nov 04, 2020

    That is from an earlier revision of the story that was definitely on the blog first, and YouTube. I can't remember the exact name of the line of stories("Where are we at?" or something like that) but they were pretty good. The stories ended with Jerry returning to the gas station after Jack has what can only be described as a mental breakdown.


    I seem to remember MCP(Mr.CreepyPasta) posting something on YouTube about the stories being taken down for some sort of 'legal' reason involving amazon/kindle or something like that, with the release of the third book. Also, the third book pretty much covers the exact same story down to a tee IIRC without very many changes, just a few additions... but I may be wrong, it has been a long time since I listened to those stories, or read the third volume.

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    Kara May1809
    Nov 04, 2020
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    Yea that's it, thanks so much!! I really enjoyed the alternative perspective without the twist, shame it's been eradicated lol

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